To begin a "creepy" story, first begin by using the literary device of "introduction, rising action. climax, tie-up, and the ending" With all the action in the book leading up to the most exciting part, or the climax.
~Screams start to connect room to room~ as a girl is getting chase by a creature that is ready to feast. The girl trip and fall as the hungry beast grab her hand and her waist and feast on his pray.
